Website Review please?

[mymobe]

Currently I have a new website.
Its about health and wealth and is pretty new. It is in a free website format as not sure what to call it as yet.
But would like to know what you think of it.

Any thoughts will be appreciated

The website is wealthandhealthhelp.weebly.com

[Wozcreative]

It looks like you put this together over a weekend. There seems to be a lack of thought put into every page.
You weren't thinking like a consumer would when building it. You just made pages and pasted your content.

If this is an hobby for you then it's fine, but if you want to make a business out of it, you will need to put a lot more time and effort into it.

You start off with "Ever had that moment in your life and thought, why is life so hard?" -- why is the first thing on the website so negative?
The rest of it sounds like you just typed it out from your mind instead of putting together planned copy.

The middle sentence doesn't even make sense to me "Three important parts of our life impact us in many ways
After many ways we have seen good and/or bad, been rich and/or poor is a part of life "

What is the point of that tiny rainbow graph? Can't even see it. Nor does the rainbow even compliment the rest of the site.

It's fine if you are using a free site.. but if you aren't prepared to do the research that it takes to build a marketable website, what's the point?

[shadojake]

Yeah, what Wozcreative said.