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boogle
10-01-2010, 10:10 AM
My wife is trying to take her voice lessons program up a notch and so I threw a site together for her. We are about ready to launch, any feedback would be awesome. Thanks!

www.boroproductions.com/micah

cbscreative
10-01-2010, 11:52 AM
Nice. Maybe it's my browser and maybe it's a loose end you need to tie up, but the arrows don't work. In case it's a browser issue, I'm using Opera.

BTW, I moved your thread because it seemed better to have it under Web Reviews.

KristineS
10-01-2010, 02:02 PM
I like the testimonials a lot and the site is nice and clean. I would have loved a voice teacher like this when I was taking lessons.

The only issue I had was that the page which told me about Micah didn't work for me. When I clicked it nothing came up. I'm using Firefox 3.6.10.

boogle
10-01-2010, 02:39 PM
Thanks, thats the one page I am still waiting on.

Harold Mansfield
10-04-2010, 10:59 AM
Very nicely done, Nice use of images, most people don't realize how important images are. The only thing I would add would be a personal portrait on the "About" page and change the text in the featured section from "Read the full story" to something more compelling and less "bloggy".

I also believe that if you list your business in Google Places that on the map the name of your business and address will show up, instead of just the pin point:
https://www.google.com/accounts/ServiceLogin?service=lbc&passive=1209600&continue=http://www.google.com/local/add/businessCenter&followup=http://www.google.com/local/add/businessCenter

dojo
11-13-2010, 12:52 PM
It's a very nice design, love it. I'd just say that it would be a good idea to not cram so many sites on one domain, maybe it's better to pay 10 bucks on a new domain for her. Other than that, super.

SiteSciences
11-13-2010, 08:08 PM
copywriting:
- "Especially for people under 18, singing without proper technique can ruin your voice for the rest of your life" for more impact, move the first phrase (and similar ones) to the end. Main point should be first

usability:
- add a newsletter description. people like to know what they're signing up for and how often they'll be receiving mail.
- add a headshot on the about page. the about content could also be in 2 or more paragraphs, which will make it easier to read, and probably increase the times people read the full text.