I don't think any of the copy suggested is very good... although I love Peets coffee and it definitely is better than Starbucks.
I think Peet's should emphasize what differentiates them from other coffee makers out there rather than getting caught in the "we're better than everyone else just because we are" thought pattern this ad seems stuck in.
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Crazy Dog Creative: Graphic Design and Marketing
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