Thread: Is This Smart Copywriting?
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Old 01-10-2009, 06:54 PM   #23 (permalink)
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Speaking of stripping messages down:

Suppose you strip "The relentless pursuit of perfection" down to "The pursuit of perfection" or just "Perfection."

Does that improve the original slogan?
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